Pinkie Pie: Okay, so the first line has 11 syllables and ends with "one." The second line has 14 syllables and ends with "filled." So if you're not keen on rewriting the original lines, we could stick with that.
Twilight Sparkle: Ah, so I come up with two lines that rhyme and have the same syllable count and I'm good, right?
Pinkie Pie: You COULD do that, but I'm not sure it's really the best approach.
Twilight Sparkle: Hm?
Pinkie Pie: I don't think this spell is so much a formal poem as it is a flowery statement. The meter's all over the place, for starters! The first line has an iamb and three anapaests, so you'd think the second one is one iamb and four anapaests. But no, not quite!
Twilight Sparkle: Not... sure that I follow...
Pinkie Pie: The point is, you've got a big idea to communicate, so you're probably better off writing it your own way.
Twilight Sparkle: So... That's it? After breaking out the deerstalker cap and everything... Your expert poetry advice for me is to just "go freestyle?"
Pinkie Pie: Hey, sometimes you need an expert to tell you these kinds of things!
Twilight Sparkle: Where did you even GET these hats?
Learning about new stuff when you go researching things for your story/comic is one of the more fun parts of the work. I remember back when I wrote that wild western Trixie fanfic learning about old western slang that was rather neat. I even started using them for a little bit in actual conversations just to get practice on using them right. I've forgotten most of that, but a few stick with me. Seeing that I want to take the setting of that old fanfic and rewrite an actual novel with it, I been going back to the old links to get the materials again. Problem is my motivation to get back into the writing process. I've been slower than molasses in January.
I have always relied upon the mnemonic that "anapest" is a dactyl.
The mnemonic that "dactyl," which of course means "finger," describes a foot that looks like your finger is clearly inferior.
Also, always remember that if anyone speaking English (or any other stress-timed language) says anything about spondees, they're just being pretentious; there's no logical reason to ever claim the existence of a foot that doesn't have exactly one stressed syllable in a stress-timed language.
While, I don’t actually agree with anything you said beyond the way to remember what an anapest is, I did just get to read a delightful scholarly article on the topic I found on JSTOR, so thanks for brightening my day with learning!
"Look, I spent decades figuring out how to tell the laws of physics to sit down and shut up. I didn't have time to ALSO get a degree in the humanities. I'm not some dabbler like a BARD." - Ye Olde Wizzarde
Well, gee, you should have taken your first level in something easier, like bard or rogue. I mean, if you'd started as a bard, you could have cruised through a few weeks of Bard Camp to get your first level, and then picked up the wizard class later.
I suppose it could be Shakespeare style, where you force the words into whatever the hell meter you want and nobody disagrees because you're Bill F. Shakespeare.
A few months ago I was at a LARP (Witcher-based Horror) where a bunch of Science people found out that to save all of our lives, we needed to make a ritual, and through analysis of the texts they had found a bunch of rules.
I as a Bard was asked to write the ritual based on these rules and after a short look I told them that their rules were bad and impossible, and if I had to follow these rules we would all die.
So I forced them to condense the rules into small pieces from which I picked what made sense if I had to make something possible.
Also I know how to make an interesting ritual, and if I had followed the rules the Ritual would have taken about 1 hour and would have been boring as fuuuuck. Some times it is okay to meta-game to make sure everyone is engaged <3
"From one to another, another to one.
A mark of one's destiny singled out alone, fulfilled."